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Erolei Keefer
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Erolei Keefer
Full Name: Erolei " 'Lei " Keefer
Gender: Male.
Physique (Height/Weight): 6'3/126lbs. He's a rather lanky troll all around.
Age: 8 sweeps.
Personality:
Going by his last name, Keefer is a rather pleasant troll, despite being raised in less than desirable circumstances. He always likes to put the interests and personal desires of others before his own, using this as some sort of strategy in order to "fit in" more with society. He's obviously doing a lot wrong though, since he's often manipulated by his employers and so-called friends rather frequently. He can definitely tell, but hardly ever stands up for himself or just doesn't sugarcoat stuff. It's hard for people to take him seriously and not take advantage of him when he's just.. So nice.
Although he may be nice and kind of a pushover, he does have his limits. If something is extremely morally wrong, he'll definitely resist it.. But he has done some questionable things in his lifetime. That's the original reason why he'd left his cavern to become a farmer or someone more productive, to improve and repair himself as a person. He was also just really sick of eating raw grubmeat.
In battle, Erolei isn't exactly the most aggressive troll, much preferring to defend and try and talk his way out of situations.. Unless you get between him and someone he holds dear. He tries to suppress his primal urges most of the time, but when situations like this come up, he often just lets his body fully take over. On the topic of friendships, Keefer is extremely loyal to friends and quadmates, defending them with his life. He wants to better both them, and himself in the end.
Physical appearance:
Erolei is a tall, twiggy troll with rather long arms and legs, perfect for sprinting long distances and grappling onto things. His body is built more for survival than aesthetic, looking rather.. "Ugly", as some would and have said before. He looks more like a cryptid than a troll, but is just a gentle giant overall.
His hair is cut short and is often messy, sticking up straight in the air.. Kinda like a duck's ass. Despite its appearance, he tries to take good care of it and bathe as often as he can. His eyes are already partially filled in with his blood color, and are light-reflective like a cat's. His horns sit at the top of his forehead, curling just back out of it, hardly reaching the back of his head. Erolei is a rather fluffy boy, hair covering his arms and a bit on his chin. He also has killer sideburns.
His wardrobe mainly consists of overalls and red button up flannel, but he'll occasionally throw on a pair of ratty jeans and sneakers instead of his regular steel-toed work boots. He wouldn't trade his shirt for anything, given to him when he was just a young boy in the cavern he was raised in. Luckily, he's grown into it.
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Fears/Insecurities:
Likes/Hobbies:
Dislikes:
Handle: altruisticBotany [AB]
Typing Quirk/Color: You try and type as normally as you can, though you tend to forget words sometimes.
Blood color: Pure jade.
Psionic Power: N/A.
Symbol:
God Tier Title: Knight of Breath
Land: Land of Fog and Cults
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: forkKind, a large steel pitchfork with bits of blood splattered on it.
Fetch Modus: Never going to use this.
Other:
Gender: Male.
Physique (Height/Weight): 6'3/126lbs. He's a rather lanky troll all around.
Age: 8 sweeps.
Personality:
Going by his last name, Keefer is a rather pleasant troll, despite being raised in less than desirable circumstances. He always likes to put the interests and personal desires of others before his own, using this as some sort of strategy in order to "fit in" more with society. He's obviously doing a lot wrong though, since he's often manipulated by his employers and so-called friends rather frequently. He can definitely tell, but hardly ever stands up for himself or just doesn't sugarcoat stuff. It's hard for people to take him seriously and not take advantage of him when he's just.. So nice.
Although he may be nice and kind of a pushover, he does have his limits. If something is extremely morally wrong, he'll definitely resist it.. But he has done some questionable things in his lifetime. That's the original reason why he'd left his cavern to become a farmer or someone more productive, to improve and repair himself as a person. He was also just really sick of eating raw grubmeat.
In battle, Erolei isn't exactly the most aggressive troll, much preferring to defend and try and talk his way out of situations.. Unless you get between him and someone he holds dear. He tries to suppress his primal urges most of the time, but when situations like this come up, he often just lets his body fully take over. On the topic of friendships, Keefer is extremely loyal to friends and quadmates, defending them with his life. He wants to better both them, and himself in the end.
Physical appearance:
Erolei is a tall, twiggy troll with rather long arms and legs, perfect for sprinting long distances and grappling onto things. His body is built more for survival than aesthetic, looking rather.. "Ugly", as some would and have said before. He looks more like a cryptid than a troll, but is just a gentle giant overall.
His hair is cut short and is often messy, sticking up straight in the air.. Kinda like a duck's ass. Despite its appearance, he tries to take good care of it and bathe as often as he can. His eyes are already partially filled in with his blood color, and are light-reflective like a cat's. His horns sit at the top of his forehead, curling just back out of it, hardly reaching the back of his head. Erolei is a rather fluffy boy, hair covering his arms and a bit on his chin. He also has killer sideburns.
His wardrobe mainly consists of overalls and red button up flannel, but he'll occasionally throw on a pair of ratty jeans and sneakers instead of his regular steel-toed work boots. He wouldn't trade his shirt for anything, given to him when he was just a young boy in the cavern he was raised in. Luckily, he's grown into it.
Strengths:
- His crushing physical strength, despite having little to no muscle.
- He possesses the ability to make friends rather easily.
- Keefer's appearance is likely to scare off any potential attacker.
Weaknesses:
- His extreme kindness is definitely one of his downfalls.
- He isn't exactly fluent in standard Alternian, speaking in only heavily broken Alternian and the shrill screech-language of his original brooding cavern.
- Often gives his heart to those that will shatter it, gives too many chances.
Fears/Insecurities:
- Erolei has minor body image issues, though he tries not to pay much attention to them.
- Failure, and disappointing his quads.
Likes/Hobbies:
- Farming, specifically harvesting animals for his boss, who happens to be a butcher.
- Making his own brews and jerky, with a little help from his employer.
- Visiting his "family" back in his ratty old cavern which he still considers home.
- Learning new skills/how to speak properly.
- Handing down the useful skills he has down to younger trolls.
- Socializing with the other farmhands and those at the market where he sells his junk.
- Gardening, though exclusively growing herbs and whatnot, such as lilac and sage.
- Playing guitar for trolls willing to listen and help him improve.
Dislikes:
- Trespassers.
- Pests that harm the crops and his own plants.
- Higher-blooded trolls. He can't be around anyone higher than purple, and even that's pushing it.
- Being demonized because of his heritage and appearance.
- Pompous asshats.
- Trolls who poke at him because of his odd southern drawl.
Handle: altruisticBotany [AB]
Typing Quirk/Color: You try and type as normally as you can, though you tend to forget words sometimes.
Blood color: Pure jade.
Psionic Power: N/A.
Symbol:
- Symbol:
God Tier Title: Knight of Breath
Land: Land of Fog and Cults
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: forkKind, a large steel pitchfork with bits of blood splattered on it.
Fetch Modus: Never going to use this.
Other:
- Erolei is fluent in his cavern's own language of screeches and chirps,
and has probably the nicest voice by their standards. - His birth cavern is one of the dirtiest on-planet, and produces almost all of the mutants in the surrounding area. The jades here are filthy, and are usually all cannibalistic monsters looking vaguely similar to eachother, despite varying body types. They all feast on undesirable and sick grubs, living in large packs of 15-20 in the tunnel systems. This cavern basically has its own culture and everything, trolls on the surface labeling them as forest monsters and savages.
Let's just say Erolei didn't get the warmest welcome upon first coming into a town. - Ero's boss is a big beefy purple blood named Bittie. He's a pretty cool guy,
but he isn't very social. He's always working on something, and is rarely ever seen relaxing.. Or seen in general. - He works on Bits' farm, harvesting lusii and trolls alike to make into jerky and other "meat" based products that he sells at the market every weekend, along with 2 or 3 other farmhands. They tend to stay away from him.
- He probably could've been a country singer if he knew enough proper Alternian.
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Re: Erolei Keefer
Yo! This is gonna be my first app I look through so I wanted to try something different here. In the spoiler is just some things I really liked about the character as well as some advice I'd like to give to you. Disregard it if you don't care or whatever, but ye!
tl;dr Besides my nitpicks, this dude is flawless! Accepted!
- Spoiler:
- Neat! Seeing a lot of similarities with my very own Country-Boy.
Can't really find anything to necessarily deny this lil' dude, but I do have some things I'd like to note. Mostly just things I found interesting and stuff.- The whole savage cavern idea with your troll is hella tight! At first, I was a little wary at the idea admittedly, but over time as I read a bit more into the fella, I actually considered using this sorta head-canon thing to make stuff of my own, so good on you!
- Mostly just me saying that this could also be a potential explanation to how Kanaya 'killed zombies'. The savage-boys could be one of those types?? Idk, I figured I'd suggest it.
- The interconnecting characters thing is nice! I've noticed this being a trend with your characters and I like it! It's always nice to give your characters some set-in-stone friend circles so their goals/interests could build off of them.
- Remembering this is Alternia and not Beforus is a good thing to have! Even the nicest trolls have to have an aggressive instinct. How they choose to convey this can be done in numerous ways though! Given that this fella is a menacing looking motherfucker is a good way to sorta circumnavigate around that problem. GG.
- sideburns.
-Enough of my tid-bits and stuff. The last thing I wanted to point out before I ollie out is QUIRKS!!!
Quirks are pretty confusing. I still don't really have the hang of it yet, but you should consider givin the dude at least a prefix or a letter change. Heck, even the age old 'capitalizes a certain letter' meme is still viable. Yep, yep. - The whole savage cavern idea with your troll is hella tight! At first, I was a little wary at the idea admittedly, but over time as I read a bit more into the fella, I actually considered using this sorta head-canon thing to make stuff of my own, so good on you!
tl;dr Besides my nitpicks, this dude is flawless! Accepted!
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