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 Alex Hoffman (Critique Wanted)

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PostSubject: Alex Hoffman (Critique Wanted)   Fri Feb 12, 2016 11:44 am

Full Name: Alex Hoffman
Gender: Male
Height: 4'9"
Age: 12.6

Physical appearance: When not swathed in blankets, Alex appears to be a young male human. His hazel eyes often barely peek out from under his brown, tangled bush of a haircut. His skin is pale, which is to be expected of one who doesn't see sunlight often. He's a little short for his age, a little pudgy. He wears a blue shirt with his symbol in white on it (mostly to keep his Aunt happy - she's the one who got it for him and it's not his favorite shirt). He wears jeans, and when he has to leave the house, sneakers.

Personality: Alex is a calm person, hardly ever discontent with anything that comes his way. Part of that comes from a belief that fate has a plan for everyone, part of that comes from a complete lack of being able to change his Aunt’s behavior in any way, so he might as well accept it. He’s not so much lazy as he likes to be still when he works (or at least that’s what he tells himself). One of the only things that can really get him up and excited is the prospect of going camping – then he’s up, packing, ready to hit the road.

His true passion, though, lies in art. He’s quite proud of most of the things he makes, though he tries not to brag about it. He’s always happy to share, open to critique, and especially likes when his friends share *their* work with him. However, even when painting, he likes to stay wrapped up and warm. He mostly paints scenery, but tries his hand at drawing people and characters from time to time, especially when he wants to thank someone.

Alex is a follower by heart, though more of following his instincts than following what anyone else wants him to do. He’d be confused why anyone saw him as a leader, though. He’s selfless in mindset, but doesn’t respect the work his Aunt does to try to make him happy. He wishes she’d just cool her jets for one day. He tends to work with his emotions, but he’s known to physically hide in stressful situations. He’s an introvert, except when it comes to his tendency to gamble. He frequently wagers with his friends, staking favors or dares on the line. He usually loses.

Handle: quiescentAesthetic
Typing Style: He speaks calmly, luxuriously, as if nothing in the world were the matter or could rush him in any way...
Eye color: hazel-green (#889438)
Symbol: a sparrow he drew himself
Guardian: Overbearing Aunt

Strengths: Views the world optimistically. Accepts what fate delivers in any form, doesn't get hung up on sad or frustrating things. Is good at drawing. Has good sense of humor.
Weaknesses: dislikes leaving the house except to camp (or his blankets, ever). Lover, not fighter. Compulsively gambles, loses more often than not.
Fears/Insecurities: Self-image, which isn't helped by staying inside all day.
Likes and Hobbies: Art, of course. Draws, paints, and writes. Wagers compulsively. Loves to camp. Plays games, watches TV. Loves to roleplay.
Dislikes: Peanut butter. Being laughed at. People complaining about his inactive lifestyle.

God Tier Title: Witch of Breath ((unless Witch is confirmed as being female-only))
Land: Land of Lakes and Elegance
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: penkind ((carries around his sketchbook in his sylladex, but for swapping colors without having a giant pile of writing implements on the ground, these are easy-access in the strife portfolio))

Describe your character in three words: Accepting Bundled Artist

If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?: Sketchbook and a pile of blankets. That'll keep him going until he dies of dehydration, easily.

Other: Types in Green (#48F748).
Consorts are tigers.
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PostSubject: Re: Alex Hoffman (Critique Wanted)   Fri Feb 12, 2016 4:15 pm

welp, you said you wanted critique, so here goes nothin'!

SUPA SCATHING CRITIQUE:
 
I could go deeper, but I don't... actually want to rn

So yeah, approved since that is also my job!

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