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PostSubject: Tiamat Asiiaq   Thu Jan 21, 2016 4:30 pm

Full Name: Tiamat Asiiaq
Gender: female
Height & Weight: 5 ft 7 inch, 9 stone 10 lb
Birthdate: unknown
Age: 7.5 sweep
Physical appearance:
She has black, short hair, which she wears in like a thousand spikes, which looks like octopus' tentacles, and it gets shorter near to her fins. She wears a small golden ring in her left earfin. She has oval face, her eyes are elegant, and her blood color starts to show in them. A scar runs through her right eye from the outer end of her brow to her nose.  
Her horns are like laid down S-es, and curl back elegantly.
She is lean and slim, but strong, and walks with self-confidence, sometimes even marches.
She wears black long-sleeves with her sign printed on it, with a violet vest, designed to reach the middle of her thighs. She sport black skin-close trousers with knee high boots decorated with violet stones.
She has two rings – one on her thumb and other on her index – on her right and three on her left, both on her three middle fingers.
Personality:
She is self-confident, because she thinks her blood color protects her, and she can get away with more than others. Although she enjoys this advantage the hemospectrum gives her, she wishes for a system, where talents decide the ranks and in which she could show she isn’t just a noble, but better than most troll ever becomes.
She thinks she is better than anyone, so she can be a jerk sometimes, but if she finds someone a formidable fighter, a useful ally or a worthy rival, she can be helpful, if they ready to reciprocate.
Tiamat has an air which she could use to scare and control others, but she rarely lives with it, since she thinks everyone is out for his or herself and she isn’t a helpful troll. Of course, if she must work in a team, she accepts it, and pushes the team to victory, because she wants to see herself a winner, no matter in what.
She likes hunting and goes for the killing. Though her lusus would survive on any animal, she likes to feed her with other trolls lusii, because she thinks this will make both of them stronger.
Another thing she likes is dueling. With her pride, she easily find herself in one, a she think it’s the only way to settle an argument, which suits her blood.
When she has time between a duel, a hunt and an expedition, she dreams about leading a fleet to the unknown and becoming a glorious hero. She collects movies and books about spaceships and different planets, already colonized, fiction and science both.

Handle: irregularWave
Typing Quirk: She uses –in’ instead of -ing, When angry, or nervous she uses 8 exclamation or question mark. She uses 1-s instead of I-s. When writing an emoji, she starts it with an S, like: S:)
Blood color: violet
Symbol:

Lusus: Octomom

Strengths:

  • Formidable fighter and hunter, she is good at middle-ranged and close combat, though she is best with the latter


  • Cunning


  • Frightening aura


  • Scavenging

Weaknesses:

  • Narcissist and selfish


  • Easily angered if someone questions her abilities. (This can go two way, either by ended with a duel, or she is going into range, dependent who said it and what is said. She accepts critism better from allies and worthy rivals, worse from who she defeted or show weakness.)


  • One of her weakest point is that she accepts any challenge to defend her superioriority, and usually acts brash in this challenges



    • She isn't a long rage combatant.


    • She is a mess if she has to fight side-by-side with more than one person


    • "Scavenging", sometimes from living trolls too

    Fears/Insecurities: Feels like she has to prove herself better than anyone else.Likes:

    • FLARP or any ‘game’ with huge award


    • Winning


    • Hunting, fighting


    • Being in center of attention


    • Scavenging and piracy


    • Shiny things


    • exploring, spaceships

    Dislikes:

    • Showing weakness


    • Helping others without getting anything back


    • Hemospectrum


    • Losing


    • Anyone who tries to tell her what to do before they prove themselves someone worthy

    Driving force: Being the best.Hobbies:

    • Hunts


    • Duels


    • Exploring and scavenging


    • Collecting books and movies of expeditions (fictional nd documentaristic)

    God Tier Title: Thief of Rage
    Land: Land of Troubled Water and Blackened Mind
    Derse or Prospit: Prospit
    Strife Specibus: spearkind
    Psionic Power: None

    Describe your character in three words: proud, narcissist, jerk
    If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?:
    Her spear and her lusus.
    If your character could change anything about themselves, what would they change?:
    Nothing, she thinks she is good as she is.
    Your character opens their fridge; what do they see?:
    Fish and see food with some random lusii parts sometimes, if she hunted for long with Octomom.Other:

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Last edited by temporaryAbsent on Wed Jan 27, 2016 12:33 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : Hair, strength and weaknesses, lists)
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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:16 am

First off, welcome to the roleplay. You've presented a very interesting oc here that is largely ready to go except for a few small things. First, I thing you need to better explain what's going on with her hair

"which she wears in spike and it’s even shorter near to her fins"

I'm having issues understanding or visualizing what you mean here, maybe reword it to make it more clear.

After that, your weaknesses are decent character traits, but they focus more the personality rather then physical limitation. Think about what range she's best at, and then figure out which range she's best at. Long, Medium, Short are all the common ranges used. Another weakness that may be better, rather then proud, is that she's easily insulted which can lead her to acting rash maybe?

Again ,your character sheet seems largely on the money, just needs some tweeks to make it ship shape.
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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Fri Jan 22, 2016 9:06 am

Thank you I'll correct it.

Also I forgot to thank you for calling her interesting. So thanks.

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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Fri Jan 22, 2016 12:24 pm

lol youz welcome
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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Fri Jan 22, 2016 12:54 pm

Okay, I think I cleared it up!

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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Wed Jan 27, 2016 12:36 pm

I don't want to trouble anyone, but it was five day I was told to edit some things. If you have some free time, would you check on it?

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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Wed Jan 27, 2016 2:45 pm

Please, please PM moderators, admins, etcetera, and if nobody responds, bump the thread. Any admin can approve, any overall moderator, or any character app moderator.
I'm not going to approve this because BK saw flaws, and I don't know if these are what he was talking about. Currently telling him to approve it...

Sorry :P

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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Wed Jan 27, 2016 7:34 pm

Approved. I apologize for the delay
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PostSubject: Re: Tiamat Asiiaq   Thu Jan 28, 2016 12:05 am

Thanks. Not a problem.

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