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PostSubject: Sam Ingram   Fri Jan 08, 2016 5:49 pm

Full Name: Samuel Ingram
Gender: Preferred to be called a he
Height & Weight: 5'4 & 135 lb.
Birthdate: August 19th, 1998
Age: 8 Sweeps / 16 Human Years

Physical appearance: He has jet black hair that tends to spike up without his beanie on. He has pointy ears, but they're hidden under his hair. His eyebrows aren't too abnormal, although they do point up at the front tips. His eyes are completely white, and he looks as if he's gotten about 2 hours of sleep each day. He has a sharp tooth sticking out of his mouth, which sometimes cuts him when he frowns. Thus, because of this, he has a bit of a scar underneath his mouth. He has short horns, but they're quite pointy at the ends. He always wears two shirts- a long black shirt underneath a blue t-shirt. He wears a green beanie to keep his hair from blowing up, and to keep stylish. He wears casual black jeans, and has dark red casual shoes on. He constantly slouches, and is usually scolded for his posture.

Personality: He's actually pretty nice, but he is quick-to-anger. He's a bit of a pervert to the female-preferred Trolls, as well. He has a special attraction to his beanie because he had found it on the ground one day- yes, yes, I know that sounds stupid. But, it was one of the worst days of his life. He was tempted to commit seppuku (suicide, for those non-Japanese speakers), but when he saw the green of the beanie, he was reminded of the good things in life. Such as his lusu, Hipcat. Thus, he keeps the beanie to remind himself everything is alright. He is so attached to his laptop because it was his first-ever gift- given to him by an old friend. He had heard that friend died recently, and will cherish the laptop for as long as he lives, in memory of his friend. His relationship with his lusus is quite well- they tend to hang out in his apartment a lot. Since they're both quite lazy when it comes to being at home, they don't do much in terms of chores. Their apartment is a mess, and they never bother to clean it. He has a particular dislike to royalty and haughty people alike because they're, well, douches. They act like they're better than everyone, and he absolutely hates that. He's always been a sort of selfless person, and always thinks most trolls are better than him- which, in most cases, they are. He also is always insecure about him being dumber than everyone because, well, he wants to be intelligent. He really does. He wants to be the smartest troll he knows, because he knows being smart is an advantage- one of which he just doesn't have. One that he wishes he has. He also swears a lot.

Handle: justletmefuckingtype
Typing Quirk: Capitalizes the second letter of each word - Doesn't capitalize the first letter of each word - Writes his o's as 0's, and his 0's as o's. - Writes E's as 3's, and 3's as E's.
Blood color: Yellow
Symbol: Sickle with an arrow sticking out of the handle.
Lusus: A cat with a beanie and sunglasses. His name is Hipcat.
Strengths: Speed
Weaknesses: Weak, Quick-to-anger, Annoying voice
Fears/Insecurities: Losing his eyesight, Losing his beanie, Losing his laptop, Him being too annoying to make any friends
Likes: Technology, Beautiful landscapes, Pretty fem-preferred Trolls
Dislikes: Anything including strength, Royalty, Trolls who think they're better than anyone, Misspelling
Driving force: Become an interesting person
Hobbies: RPing, Gaming, Travelling

God Tier Title: Page of Breath
Land: City
Derse or Prospit: Prospit
Strife Specibus: KnifeKind
Psionic Power: N/A

Describe your character in three words: Quick, Annoying, Traveller
If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?: His lusus and duct tape.

If your character could change anything about themselves, what would they change?: His intelligence, because he wants to be above-average instead of just the average joe.

Your character opens their fridge; what do they see?: Pizza Rolls

Other: He gained his speed from many (Earth) years of running from conflict- as he tends to do that a lot. Whenever there is conflict concerning him that contains physical fighting, he runs the hell away. Thus, he has developed a bit of an advantage to his speed, from all those (Earth) years of running.

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PostSubject: Re: Sam Ingram   Fri Jan 08, 2016 6:11 pm

First off, welcome to the site! It's always a good thing to see new blood (and flesh, teeth and bones, etcetera) here!

Buuut, back to the template. Haha, we're on topic now.
I actually really like what you have here! I can understand who the character is pretty well, and can see that you know what you're talking about with him.
But, there's just a bit of a lack in the Personality section. I saw a good, fat paragraph in Phys. Desc., which really let me visualize him, but I still don't quite know how he thinks! I can glean from different points on the app that he is insecure about his intelligence/how others see him and losing his possessions, but why don't you put some of that (and reasons behind it), into the personality section? Just some stuff to get thoughts flowing, but,
Why is he particularly attached to his hat and laptop? What kind of a relationship does he have with his Lusus? What, particularly, does he have against royalty and haughty people in general? And what's the story behind his speed?

ALSO, you seem to be using a class and aspect, Squire and Speed, which are not canon. Howeeeever, you can submit your own! Check the classpect section! Class Template, Aspect template. Since it's your first time making one, it's free, but otherwise it costs boonies, which you can rack up by posting or simply being here!
Or, you could just switch his classpect to something canon and avoid the trouble owo

Otherwise, though, this all looks really good-
Try that and we're done here ;3

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PostSubject: Re: Sam Ingram   Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:05 pm

There- is that better?

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PostSubject: Re: Sam Ingram   Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:18 pm

That's perfect :>
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PostSubject: Re: Sam Ingram   Fri Jan 08, 2016 8:20 pm

Hooray!

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