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Music Oliver
((From Music's admin: I couldn't find the edit button, so....please work with me here.))
Music Oliver
Full Name: Music "Ghost" Oliver
Gender: Female
Height and Weight: 5'6 65 lbs
Birthdate: January 8th 1999
Age: 16
Physical Appearance: Emo-styled black hair that reaches her mid-back, pale white skin, full lips, model figure, black leather jacket, gloves like Dirk's, black skinny jeans and combat boots, black tank top.
Personality: She's very sweet when she wants to be, but has a VERY deadly temper.
But, she does have emotions, and hides them. She'll show most of them through her music, except love.
She'll show she loves you romanticly by kissing you on top of the head, then looking away.
Handle: darkSongs
Typing Style: $=S a=A
Eye Color: Silver
Symbol: Strange Music symbol
Guardian: Her father
Strengths: Combat, caretaking
Weaknesses: Insecure, depression, brain damage
Fears: Herself, death
Likes: Stuffed animals, chocolate, animals, kids, skateboard
Dislikes: Pink, green, fire
Driving force: Anger
Hobbies: Singing, caretaking the blind, caretaking animals, fostering children
God tier Title: General of English
Land: Land of Crypts
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: GuitarKind
Describe your character in three words: Scared, depressed, insane
If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?: Her leather jacket and an IPod.
If your character could change anything about themselves, what would they change?: Her brain damage to get her memory back.
Your character opens their fridge; what do they see?: Milk, eggs, bacon, sausage, juice, yogurt, fruits and veggies.
Music Oliver
Full Name: Music "Ghost" Oliver
Gender: Female
Height and Weight: 5'6 65 lbs
Birthdate: January 8th 1999
Age: 16
Physical Appearance: Emo-styled black hair that reaches her mid-back, pale white skin, full lips, model figure, black leather jacket, gloves like Dirk's, black skinny jeans and combat boots, black tank top.
Personality: She's very sweet when she wants to be, but has a VERY deadly temper.
But, she does have emotions, and hides them. She'll show most of them through her music, except love.
She'll show she loves you romanticly by kissing you on top of the head, then looking away.
Handle: darkSongs
Typing Style: $=S a=A
Eye Color: Silver
Symbol: Strange Music symbol
Guardian: Her father
Strengths: Combat, caretaking
Weaknesses: Insecure, depression, brain damage
Fears: Herself, death
Likes: Stuffed animals, chocolate, animals, kids, skateboard
Dislikes: Pink, green, fire
Driving force: Anger
Hobbies: Singing, caretaking the blind, caretaking animals, fostering children
God tier Title: General of English
Land: Land of Crypts
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: GuitarKind
Describe your character in three words: Scared, depressed, insane
If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?: Her leather jacket and an IPod.
If your character could change anything about themselves, what would they change?: Her brain damage to get her memory back.
Your character opens their fridge; what do they see?: Milk, eggs, bacon, sausage, juice, yogurt, fruits and veggies.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Join date : 2015-05-18
Re: Music Oliver
Pretty sure being 5'6 and 65 pounds is physically impossible, considering that's roughly the weight a healthy 7-8 year old is, sometimes 7-10. Especially at 16. That'd take severe illness to put someone at that weight. A more realistic weight is anywhere along the lines of 115-200, which is what the average human tends to weigh at adulthood, 16 being roughly the beginning of the end phase of puberty, by which point many are at their set height for adulthood. They may grow an inch or possibly two, but 65 pounds? That's dead, or on the verge.
Derpy- Scampermaster
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Re: Music Oliver
Yeah, she's dying, pretty sure I made that clear. I mean, brain damage can't be that bad and not kill her.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Re: Music Oliver
Well, brain damage has many stages, from simply limiting one's short-term memory, stopping certain synapses ((Which can also be a part of paralyzation at times, since signals aren't set to move muscles)), preventing one from coming up with new memories, to full-blown amnesia.
Either way, by sick and dying, I meant, an extreme stage of cancer. I'm not even sure if 65 pounds is possible for a 16 year old, but if it is, it's certainly not anywhere near where it's supposed to be. At that state, if one was even conscious, they would be completely and utterly incapable of speech or movement. It'd practically be a conscious coma.
Now, if she were to be much shorter, perhaps suffering from dwarfism, 65 pounds would not be out of the question.
Either way, by sick and dying, I meant, an extreme stage of cancer. I'm not even sure if 65 pounds is possible for a 16 year old, but if it is, it's certainly not anywhere near where it's supposed to be. At that state, if one was even conscious, they would be completely and utterly incapable of speech or movement. It'd practically be a conscious coma.
Now, if she were to be much shorter, perhaps suffering from dwarfism, 65 pounds would not be out of the question.
Derpy- Scampermaster
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Re: Music Oliver
Listen here. I don't need you on my ass, nor anyone else, so leave me ALONE and get the hell out of my OCs approval box.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Re: Music Oliver
Simply offering suggestions, as I'm rather sure the admins will back me up on the high improbability for full impossibility of that.
If you want to continue to get angry with me, then fine, but I'm genuinely trying to help you.
If you want to continue to get angry with me, then fine, but I'm genuinely trying to help you.
Derpy- Scampermaster
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Location : in my own head and on the earth
Re: Music Oliver
I DON'T. GIVE. A. FLYING. FUCK.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Re: Music Oliver
Then the question begs: Why are you even still here, then?
Derpy- Scampermaster
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Re: Music Oliver
hello! it's you're friendly neighborhood mod here! ::::)
first off, i'd like to say fankids have names that follow a 4x6/7 letter rule (John Egbert, Dave Strider, etc.), so her first name needs to be shortened to fit that rule. Secondly, the weight, despite what her illness is, should at least be more sustainable for someone of her age and height to live without looking like a walking corpse, even though this brain damage only seems to affect just her memory, rather than her weight.
her appearance should be more descriptive, as well as her personality. appearance needs to be at least one paragraph, while personality needs one or two short ones. give us more depth, instead of just shooting us with one or two main points.
her handle needs to be more... how can i put this, relative to her personality and interests. at least use more tasteful words other that 'darkSongs', like 'glumMaelstrom', or something of the likes. and humans don't have quirks like trolls, either, so that needs to be changed.
god tier needs to actually be something from canon, or from the forum fanon, and the land needs to include two things, rather than just the one word. (Land of Heat and Clockwork, Land of Frost and Frogs, etc.)
trigger/content warnings would be preferred in the topic's title when speaking about illnesses such as brain damage. and, as i have stated before, having very little weight does not mix well with damage that only affects memory, unless there's more to it.
so far, that is all i can point out, so please edit this, and i will gladly read over it again to see if it is acceptable to the forum.
have a nice day. :)
Guest- Guest
Re: Music Oliver
Nice day my ass..... I'm not gonna do whatever VRISKA says.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Join date : 2015-05-18
Re: Music Oliver
TIP: go look at other submissions for an idea on how to fill out the template properly! it helps a bunch!
Guest- Guest
Re: Music Oliver
and, if you won't take vriska's friendly advice...
trolls and rude people are not welcome on this forum, so take this constructive criticism, and stop acting like you are while you are still able to BE on this site, or just go ahead and leave. it leaves the admins and mod in a much better mood.
trolls and rude people are not welcome on this forum, so take this constructive criticism, and stop acting like you are while you are still able to BE on this site, or just go ahead and leave. it leaves the admins and mod in a much better mood.
Guest- Guest
Re: Music Oliver
While I'm able to be on this site? Oh, ho ho, that's a threat. I'll just keep coming right back.
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Re: Music Oliver
Listen up all of you viewers!
All the admins here can go suck my ass because they're nothing but judges and assholes anyway!
I don't care what anyone has to say about Music, she's perfect to me and I love her this way, so tell me to change her and you're dead to me!
All the admins here can go suck my ass because they're nothing but judges and assholes anyway!
I don't care what anyone has to say about Music, she's perfect to me and I love her this way, so tell me to change her and you're dead to me!
MusicStrider- Juvesquirt
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Re: Music Oliver
Change change, they say change is good, useful in a jam need some spam without exact coin, helps the world go around, good to bad, isn't sad, you're mad at us when your bus is so short I'm glad it's so rad too bad you're so small I'll call my mates to have a bake use your body as phosphate.
undoneSyntax- Pesky Urchin
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Re: Music Oliver
Or simple answer would to move your character to AU. Meaning you cannot roleplay with approved characters or join other session like threads. You have to make your own thread in the au section instead of anywhere else. Unless you sorted this oc out like a proper gentlemen / women would.
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