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PostSubject: Eliden Alfuin    Thu Apr 23, 2015 6:34 am

Full Name: Eliden Alfuin
Nickname(s): Eli (El-ee - used in person), SS/EA online.
Gender: Male
Height & Weight: 5’3”, 126 lbs
Age: 7.85 Sweeps (17 HY)

Physical appearance:

Short in stature, Eliden maintains a thin but lightly muscled build. His horns extend out and forwards, curling towards the end before being capped by more spherical nubs. They are roughly three feet in length, if they didn't curl inwards and thus shorten the perceived length by a decent amount. He has a softly angled face, with an aquiline nose bisecting his Jade-tinged gray eyes, which are surrounded by the typical sclera.

Eli favors baggy tops including sweaters, coats, and shirts, but is most often seen in a large black greatcoat used to hide his arm - his symbol being emblazoned on the back. Below this is a gray v-neck with a pendant featuring his symbol. A pair of flowing black slacks are held up typically by his amphistaff in whip-form, but they seem to not actually need the pseudo-belt.

Personality:

Eliden is naturally distrustful of other Trolls, and is often paranoid about whether or not he is being watched by Alternian spies come to cull him for his missing arm. Nevertheless, once you have earned his trust he becomes very warm and sympathetic, often forgoing his own needs in order to help - though don't take his trust as a "get-out-of-jail-free card" when it comes to his suspicious nature.

Due to his handicap and the issues that come along with it, he has been very prideful and absolutely loathes whenever he needs to ask for help - he will sooner let himself fail over and over again than simply ask for help. This has also led him to be a perfectionist, and overly cautious when it comes to doing just about anything.

Handle: superfluousSeedsman

Typing Quirk/Color: Eli types in his blood color and tends to use overly-complicated word choices - he usually voids one-syllables unless there is no other choice. (i.e., “superfluous” instead of “extra”)

Blood color: Jade (#008141)
Symbol:
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Lusus: Giant Butterfly

Strengths: Physically Fit, Adept Gardener, Disciplined
Weaknesses: Handicapped, Distrusting, Proud
Fears/Insecurities: Terrified of Drones, Worries about Arm
Likes: Biotechnology, Dangerous Flora/Fauna, Flora/Fauna
Dislikes: Drones, Mechanics (non-bio),
Driving force:

Eliden’s goal has been to engineer a bioprosthetic that will not be rejected by his body and thus rid himself of his insecurities. Secondarily, he wishes to reform the treatment of disabled Trolls in the Alternian empire.

Hobbies: Gardening, Caring for his lusus, Bioengineering

God Tier Title: Soul of Life
Land: Land of Loam and Seedlings (LOLAS)
Derse or Prospit: Derse
Strife Specibus: Amphistaffkind

Describe your character in three words: The Biotech Savant

If your character were stranded on an island and could only bring two things with them, what would they be?:

His amphistaff & a water catchment.

If your character could change anything about themselves, what would they change?:

Although he will never admit it, Eliden is deeply ashamed of his missing arm. He has tried many times to replace it with a bioprosthetic of his own design, but no matter what it has been rejected by his body - thus creating doubts about his proficiency with his trade.

Your character opens their fridge; what do they see?:

Mostly sweets - honey (of the mind variety and not), candies, sugary drinks, and various sweet fruits & vegetables. Regrettably there would also be small portions of meat.

Other:

This is a total revamp of an old character of mine that was on an account that no longer exists - I am definitely not stealing anything here! Also, the amphistaff is a literal living weapon which restructures the crystalline-like cells of its body using neural impulses to become rigid or flexible (staff/spear or whip).
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PostSubject: Re: Eliden Alfuin    Thu Apr 23, 2015 3:09 pm

This is no longer a Work in Progress, unless I missed something.

Gimme critique!

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PostSubject: Re: Eliden Alfuin    Thu Apr 23, 2015 4:28 pm

Soul is not a canon class, or a class we have on this forum. For now it'd be better to just use a canon class, then maybe later you can make a soul class and swap him to it.

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PostSubject: Re: Eliden Alfuin    Thu Apr 23, 2015 8:24 pm

Hrm... I can't exactly 'create' the class as it's a fanclass proposed by the Page of Hopes tumblruser who created the Homestuck title test. His class is very crucial to his character, and I'd really like to keep it - would I be able to submit the class anyways with the Page of Hopes' class explanation?

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With proper credit + a link to her things, of course. Big ol' disclaimer saying I didn't come up with the class.
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PostSubject: Re: Eliden Alfuin    Thu Apr 23, 2015 9:57 pm

Yeah that works, just make sure to properly cite them, I'll give this pre approval so we don't have to come back here.

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-provided the soul class is made.

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